The times I’ve tried revising a story it always seems as if it gets worst.
In one story, where it doesn’t really start until Chapter 3, in the revision the story doesn’t start until Chapter 9 because of all the additional material. And while adding to a story might be good, it has to improve and strengthen the story. These additions just took up space.
I realized, after going through each chapter by scene in both revisions, that the first draft actually had a stronger story. Oh, there were plot holes and needless scenes, not to mention lots of room for improvement in dialogue, description, and character development. But the core of it, especially the end, did hold what I feel is the heart of the story. This aspect was lost in the additions of the revision.
The reason for this was twofold:
- The revision was designed to shift the narrative point of view from limited third person to first person. And the first person POV was a very cumbersome narrator.
- The revision was supposed to set up an important thematic family correlation. This has since been refuted (to an extent), and admittedly always felt at odds with how I wanted the characters to relate via family
Some of the additional plot threads I will still use (there are two major additional story lines), but as for this particular story and its future revisions, I will use them only if they actually contribute to this story. Like I said, the revision should make the story stronger, not cumbersome, boring, or stunted.
I think honestly the problem was that I was trying to rewrite the story. And while, yeah, revisions can basically mean a complete rewrite, the story core should probably stay intact.
In another story, where the original draft starts out with a very clear problem and objective for the protagonist, the first revision went back to her birth and a few snapshots before the original drafts starts. While those scenes aren’t badly written or unnecessary, per se, I do feel that they halt the action. If anything, if I feel they’re necessary enough I would add them later as flashbacks or explanation.
Anyway, these are just some of my thoughts on my revisions. Has anyone else ever had similar trouble?